What I'm Writing:
In our last email, I was mid-surgery on this revision. Things were messy and unruly. The story still felt too wild to wrangle. Now I am relieved to say that it's nearly wrangled.
As of writing this, I am about 93% into this edit. I still have a couple spots to smooth out and the final chapter to write, but I'm feeling way better about it than I was two weeks ago.
A lot of people think that when you revise, you revise everything at once: the plot, the characters, the voice of the different POVs. In reality, I can only usually edit on one level at a time. Developmental edits usually center around the plot and checking the cause and effect of the story. Writers call this scene and sequence because you're checking for the transformation of the characters on a scene level and the over-arching action and reactions of a story.
Once I finish this pass, I will go back and work on some of the emotional highs and lows and scrutinize the romance arc as a whole. Writing romance means taking a good hard look at the way intimacy develops between the characters. I'm usually looking for three things:
- Does the progression of the relationship feel natural/believable?
- Are the character's emotional arcs in alignment with the romance?
- Am I showing the progression of that intimacy more than I'm telling the reader about it?
That last one in particular can be tricky. There's an idea sometimes among readers that you should always be showing everything through action, and you should be showing a lot of it. But if you "showed" everything in a genre-blended book it would likely end up being 200k+ words. Not to mention that would be boring. For that reason, I go through the manuscript at this stage and pick the spots where I really want to play up the showing and sit with each of those scenes for a while to figure out exactly how to do that.
This is one of my favorite parts of the process, though it's admittedly not a place where I can make quick progress, and that can be frustrating.
Once I finish this round of edits next week, I'll send it off to my beta team for their feedback. Then, I will switch over to the poison book drafting (this is a working title I promise it is not actually called the poison book) while I wait. I am still delusionally trying to finish that draft by the end of the year. I'm not sure that's possible but crazier things happened. Time will tell, and I'm sure I'll have some idea of how that's going in our next email.